hi, I like your photos. I think it is very cute, but I have one suggestion for you. I saw your proposal and you shot list maybe you can take some photos about them with their dog, with their parents the parents get home and runnings errands with them. Overall, you did good job.
Hi Lulu! Your images make me feel happy as I too love children and love watching them interact with one another. To me, it seems like your photo essay is similar to mine; it shows what children's lives in a day are like. However, it seems to me that during this progress review, you only shot them playing dress/having a tea party. I would like to see more normal day to day interactions. I think you have done a good job with not staging the pictures and capturing them in their natural everyday lives. I think you could use some work on making sure the whole image is in focus and all at the same depth of field. There is visual consistency since all of the images involve children and them playing with one another. I would say for your second progress review, there needs to be more visual variety. I wouldn't say the images are repetitive, however, it seems as though all of these were shot within a span of a couple hours if that. I would say image 6 could be removed. It is cute seeing the curls on the back of the little girl's head, but what does that actually represent? Overall, I think you have some good images that could be used in your final photo essay!
Psychological ISO 800, ƒ/18, SS 2.5s Environmental ISO 400, ƒ/4, SS 1/15s Interpretive ISO 800, ƒ/4.8, SS 1/3s
hi, I like your photos. I think it is very cute, but I have one suggestion for you. I saw your proposal and you shot list maybe you can take some photos about them with their dog, with their parents the parents get home and runnings errands with them. Overall, you did good job.
ReplyDeleteHi Lulu! Your images make me feel happy as I too love children and love watching them interact with one another. To me, it seems like your photo essay is similar to mine; it shows what children's lives in a day are like. However, it seems to me that during this progress review, you only shot them playing dress/having a tea party. I would like to see more normal day to day interactions. I think you have done a good job with not staging the pictures and capturing them in their natural everyday lives. I think you could use some work on making sure the whole image is in focus and all at the same depth of field. There is visual consistency since all of the images involve children and them playing with one another. I would say for your second progress review, there needs to be more visual variety. I wouldn't say the images are repetitive, however, it seems as though all of these were shot within a span of a couple hours if that. I would say image 6 could be removed. It is cute seeing the curls on the back of the little girl's head, but what does that actually represent? Overall, I think you have some good images that could be used in your final photo essay!
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