Hello, I think you put your photos in a very good pattern, showing them playing inside to them physically being carried outside. I think your strongest photos are the ones that were outside. They are all very different, yet they had a similar theme and being in the same area. I think your first two photos are a little too similar, the second photo I think you could have done without. I do find all the of photos give off a playful, young, and caring spirit to them. There is something about them that I can't out my finger on that makes me feel like I’m at my families easter with all my young cousins. I really enjoy the photo of all three of them with the young girl holding her stuffed animals above her head. It seems a little chaotic, but I find it works since there is a main focus on the young girl but everyone with in the photo is doing an action that fits the situation. I would have loved to see more photos of them throughout the day, such as towards nighttime where they are tiring out and not so playful to show the end of your photos sequence. I think you could have used some photos that show their entire body since most of them are very up-close and only show their upper body. Overall, I think you did very well!
Hello, I think you put your photos in a very good pattern, showing them playing inside to them physically being carried outside. I think your strongest photos are the ones that were outside. They are all very different, yet they had a similar theme and being in the same area. I think your first two photos are a little too similar, the second photo I think you could have done without. I do find all the of photos give off a playful, young, and caring spirit to them. There is something about them that I can't out my finger on that makes me feel like I’m at my families easter with all my young cousins. I really enjoy the photo of all three of them with the young girl holding her stuffed animals above her head. It seems a little chaotic, but I find it works since there is a main focus on the young girl but everyone with in the photo is doing an action that fits the situation. I would have loved to see more photos of them throughout the day, such as towards nighttime where they are tiring out and not so playful to show the end of your photos sequence. I think you could have used some photos that show their entire body since most of them are very up-close and only show their upper body. Overall, I think you did very well!
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